后续写积累提能练之情感细节描写: 喜悦与快乐 (一)
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续写积累提能练（四）
教材语料整合
亮词：
[情感描写] passion; anxious; be struck by; bitterly; ashamed
[人物描写] familiar; inspiring; generosity; humour; quality; ordinary; scar; staunch; personality
[动作描写] pour; comfort; distance; drag; hustle; lose track of; advance; tend
美句：
1. As Aristotle said, no one would choose to live without friends, even if he had all other goods. (结尾升华句)
2. He goes up to the man and finds he has a scar on his face. (动作描写) (外貌描写)
3. Stepping out of jail into the cold wind, Bob, now 58, felt lost and helpless. (情感描写)
4. Doubtfully, Bob unfolded the note. His hands were shaking by the time he had finished reading. (动作描写)
5. “You’re Jimmy’s son？！” Bob shouted in surprise. (情感描写)
拓展语料积累
情感细节描写: 喜悦与快乐 (一)
单词：
overjoyed adj. 狂喜的 delight v. 使高兴 n. 高兴→delighted adj. 高兴的 pleasure n. 高兴, 快乐→pleased adj. 高兴的; 满意的→pleasant adj. 令人愉快的, 舒适的
词块：
to one’s delight/joy/entertainment令某人高兴的是 be wild with joy/delight/happiness欣喜若狂 dance/jump for/with joy高兴得跳起舞来/跳起来 delighted/pleased beyond description高兴得无法形容 grin from ear to ear 咧嘴大笑
句型：
The thought of the moments shared with my grandpa filled me with great joy. (无灵主语句)
一想到与爷爷共度的时光, 我就充满了喜悦。
The children were thrilled/wild with joy at the sight of......孩子们一看到……就欣喜若狂。
Then came a voice far from where we were, bathing us in extreme joy. (倒装句; 现在分词作状语)
那时, 从远处传来一个声音, 使我们沉浸在极大的欢乐中。
A bright smile spread across her face. (无灵主语句) 她脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。
So overjoyed were we that we danced with joy, with a bright smile spreading across our faces. (倒装句; with复合结构) 我们高兴得手舞足蹈, 脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。
语料运用【友谊】
①____________________________________________________________________________ (无灵主语句). To start with, we had a picnic in the park, pouring out humorous stories and grinning from ear to ear. Afterward, we played a fun and competitive game of football, ②________________________ (现在分词短语作状语). I was wild with joy at the sight of everyone’s enjoying the moment of get-together to their heart’s content. With the sun beginning to set, we decided to hold a barbecue party.
③_____________________________ (with的复合结构), we were grilling and enjoying burgers and hotdogs. Then, we rose to our feet, advanced towards the grassland and began to sing and dance to the music. We were pleased beyond description. ④_____________________________________________ (倒装句).
一想到上周末与朋友们分享的活动, 我就满是喜悦。首先, 我们在公园野餐, 滔滔不绝地讲着幽默的故事, 笑得合不拢嘴。之后, 我们进行了一场有趣的足球比赛, 让我们沉浸在极度的喜悦中。看到大家尽情地享受欢聚的时刻, 我欣喜若狂。随着太阳开始下山, 我们决定举行一次烧烤聚会。脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容, 我们在烧烤, 享用汉堡和热狗。然后, 我们站起来, 向草地走去, 开始随着音乐唱歌跳舞。我们高兴得无法形容。我们非常高兴, 以至于我们永远不会忘记这次经历。
【答案解析】
① A wonderful day with friends unfolded
② laughing loudly and chasing each other on the field
③ With the warm breeze blowing gently and the fire crackling merrily
④ Hardly had the night fallen when we realized it was time to say goodbye
解析：
无灵主语句选择 "a wonderful day" 作主语，用 "unfolded" 体现事件自然展开的过程，符合无灵主语（非人称）描述场景的特点。
现在分词短语通过 "laughing""chasing"等动作，生动描绘踢足球时的欢乐氛围，与前文"fun and competitive" 呼应。
with 复合结构通过 "warm breeze blowing""fire crackling" 营造烧烤时的温馨环境，感官细节丰富场景画面。
倒装句 "Hardly...when..." 强调时间的紧凑感，既符合夜晚降临的情节推进，又通过语法结构增强句子表现力，收束全天活动。